god it hurts

© 2009 bernie

god it hurts

sometime it hurts so much
to hear them sing
to
feel it burst inside their lungs
to feel the spine
chill down your side
and now it’s gone
the moment I felt
come back on another day
please

b

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March 21, 2009. General Poetry. 1 Comment.

One Comment

  1. Anachocolata replied:

    love the “to feel the spine chill down your side” part. Very cool. It makes you think and feel it. “Please” is always a powerful word. Great poem.

    April 2nd, 2009 at 5:32 PM. Permalink.

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