Ms. Understood

© 2009 inthegardenof

You cross my way
Wafting mind waves
Minding crossed paths in passing
As a passerby would
A friend
Head down smile up-peeking through
You’re not shy enough to be sly enough
To be misunderstood.

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July 2, 2009. General Poetry. 1 Comment.

One Comment

  1. Mr. Toes replied:

    ooohh, I like it, I like it a lot.
    It’s clever and mysterious and packs a lot of power in eight lines.

    July 6th, 2009 at 11:51 AM. Permalink.

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